Wednesday, 10 October 2012

My Personal Persuasive Essay



Please comment as I would like to make my writing better.
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  1. Anonymous10 October 2012 at 12:34

    Hi I'm Christina from Mr.Howitt's class. (Also your chinese and GATE Class.)
    I really like your persuasive essay. I agree with you too! I think you should not use the different colors because it is a little hard to read. Great Job!
    My blog is:
    sb-sas33590.blogspot.sg

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    1. Anonymous15 October 2012 at 16:59

      The teacher asked us to. Red = thesis statment and conclusion, green = power 2 , blue = elaboration and explanation.

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